I really like it. Personally I would really use red for her headphones and costume, since there is red color in the bkgd, I think it will match nicely. For the Pepper name on her thigh, I would rather lose it as I find it distracting and somehow hurting the quality of the whole image.
Ahhh..a very different pepper I think tone color wise, the breasts, stomach and the thigh are the best. In comparison, the eyeshadow, the raise arm/hand and elbow and neck is a little too saturated and burnt. Like an overuse of the burn tool.
Anatomy wise, I think her neck is a tad too long for the rest of the body. Hence the head and the raised shoulder seem to be in a different picture from the other shoulder and body.
I think both hands could use a bit more line definition, like what you did with the ring on her waist and panties. It appear to me as if you haven't finished..as parts appear rather rushed in comparison to some parts that appear immensely detailed.
ehemmm you're actually very right i did rush it a bit i'm too busy to give it the proprer attention and i guess i shoud adjust something here and there as soon as i'll have sometime thanks anyway for the kind crits